rain
in a lone remote station
i stood awaiting
the train ran late
sunlight was fading
as day turned to dark
clouds gathered above the path
still became the wind
foretelling a tale of its wrath
a crack of thunder
a blaze of lightening
behold the sound
so loud, so frightening
yet for a moment
died all the sound
down came the rain
hitting hard on the ground
fragrance of the wet soil
filled the air all around
like a sweet embrace
comfort in it i found
lost in the smell
a walk i started
drenched i became
once shelter i parted
in wind and rain
the leaves were flapping
on the beat of tiny drums
trees stood singing, dancing and clapping
joyous were the sounds
magical was the sight
calmness filled the air
cast away was fright
to wash away the filth
down poured the shower
beautiful looked everything
like petals of a new flower
sparkling clean were plants
of dirt they were free
even in such darkness
it was plain for all to see
visible now and then vanished
water fell from the sky
words fail me to explain it
a sight , my oh my
pity i felt for others
not a soul was on the road
hiding in their houses
when such gifts were bestowed
lost within a world of enchantment
for hours i strolled
through all of the wonders
forgotten , time rolled
that night i shall remember
though the time is far apart
wet, dark and cold
with a chill that warmed the heart
6 comments:
poetry!
yea i forgot , you dont like poetry,
i dont dislike / unlike it....
i dont GET it... the poetry part of my brain is dead :)
major grammar issues and spelling mistakes...not bad though...keep writing...lataah
VERY nice...and from the heart. THAT's For sure. :)
Waiting for more...
*ALARMS BLARRING*
*SIRENS WAILING*
Oh copied!
Almost word for word!
frm my journal!! of tht rain back in 2002 drenching the nyt of 21st march.
Amused kinda pity i felt too.
For cowards in bed.
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